Found poetry is always a dicey venture; sometimes you get genius, sometimes you get nothing more than dead language dissected and pinned to a page. Not really a whole lot of middle ground when it comes right down to it.
This is something I found while crawling the net the last few days and it looks like he gets it. The concept of mimicking redacted documents as a form of poetic expression is intriguing to say the least. Trying to track down a copy.